Sunday, April 12, 2015

Once in Oz 1.5

This is the final installment of Once in Oz book one.  Note: This is not the wicked always wins witch. This is her predecessor.  (Started writing this series before they brought her in.)


“Ugh,” Toodles groaned in exasperation.  He’d barely clipped the piece of wood he was trying to chop, merely succeeding in knocking it over.  He set the block of wood back up again and raised the ax awkwardly over his head. 

The corner of Felix’s mouth turned up in half of grin.  “Use your back, not just your arms,” he called to him. 

Toodles managed to get a little more force behind his next blow, but the ax blade only went in far enough to get stuck. 

“She doesn’t even really need this much wood,” Toodles muttered, wriggling the ax free.

“Let me do it.” Felix held out his hand for the ax, which Toodles gladly surrendered.

The younger boy sat down on the ground a few feet away and watched Felix make short work of the log he’d been struggling with. 

“You make it look easy,” he said after a few minutes.

Felix shrugged.  “I used to do this all the time.”

For the next half hour Felix chopped wood and Toodles gathered up the split logs and carried them into the house. 

“How many more do you think it will take,” Felix asked, licking sweat off his upper lip.

“I don’t know,” Toodles answered.  “She said to fill up the wood box in the kitchen.  I keep thinking the next load will fill it up, but it doesn’t.”

“Mm,” Felix grunted, certain magic had something to do with that.  He was about to start chopping again when Natalie came over to them, carrying two wooden buckets. 

“The witch says she wants the floors shining before the sun goes down,” she started.

“Didn’t you sweep the whole house this morning?” Felix asked.

“Yes.  And now she wants the whole thing scrubbed.”  Natalie set the buckets down in front of them.  “She said for you two to take these to the river and fill them up.  Then we get to start in the kitchen.” 

“She’s sending us to fetch water?” Toodles said, grinning. 

“Don’t get excited yet,” Natalie said, glancing around the yard.  “The monkeys are going with you.”

Of course they are, Felix thought.  At least a handful of monkeys had been near them almost continuously since they’d begun two days ago.  They were always finding ways to harass their captives and interfere with their work.

Felix embedded the ax in one of the logs and picked up both the empty buckets in one hand.  He started for the front gate, Toodles hurrying after him.  Felix looked up at the afternoon sun, then at the house and sighed inwardly.  They wouldn’t be finished by sundown.  The witch had undoubtedly waited this late on purpose.    

Half a dozen monkeys waited for them at the gate, one of which was laying about at the others with Felix’s club.  For a moment, Felix had half a mind to snatch it from him and show him how to use it properly, but he thought it better just to let them form ranks around them and lead them outside the wall.  He felt a sharp jolt as he stepped out.

“Ow,” Toodles said, a step behind him.  “Was that the holding spell?”

“That was just to remind us she’s allowing us to leave,” Felix said in a measured tone, aware that the monkeys were listening.  “It would be much worse if we were trying to escape.”

“Worse?” The club wielding monkey chuckled.  “It would kill you.”

                                                   . . .

Natalie looked up from the table she was trying to wrestle up against the wall.  The boys stepped into the room, trailed by a monkey carrying Felix’s club.

“Toodles, you’re soaked,” she said. 

“Yeah.  I tripped,” he shot a glare at the monkey, “and spilled all the water out of my bucket.”

They spent the next few hours scrubbing the stone floors, taking turns going to the river for clean water as they needed it.  Despite their best efforts, as the sun sank below the horizon they still had two rooms to go. 

The witch strode into the room and glowered down at them.  “Not finished my pretties? I’m disappointed.  Well, if I can’t have clean floors I suppose I can at least enjoy teaching you a lesson.”  She smiled in a way that was anything but friendly and turned to leave.  “Once they finish in here, send them up to my study.” 

 Toodles, who had been inching closer to one of the water buckets, snatched it up and tossed the water at her.  The witch froze, rigid for a split second, then turned, sending an energy pulse through the room that knocked them all flat.  She locked her gaze on Natalie.

“Haven’t come to kill a witch eh?” she shouted, stomping over to them.  She reached down, grabbed Natalie by the throat and hauled her up.  “Did you think the water would do it?  Foolish girl, that’s just a myth.”  She lifted Natalie until her feet no longer touched the floor. 

The witch’s fingers tightened around her throat, closing off her air way.  “That is a mistake that’s going to cost you.”

Natalie tried to pry the witch’s fingers loose, tried to kick to free herself, but the witch only laughed and squeezed harder.  Picked up by a tornado, hounded by flying monkeys, enslaved by a witch, and now it would end, worlds away from home.  Natalie tried to blink back the tears in her eyes; if she was going to die she didn’t want to go out blubbering, but she couldn’t stop of few from rolling down her cheeks.

The witch grinned as Natalie’s struggling ebbed.  “Now, this is what happens to little girls who try to kill-ahhh!” She shrieked as if in pain and released Natalie. 

Natalie crumpled to the floor, gasping for breath. 

“No,” the witch growled.  “Not tears. Ugh, you horrible girl.”  She raised a hand to strike Natalie, but before she could, it disintegrated into dust.  “Nooo!” she shrieked again as the rest of her followed. 

For a few seconds the only sound breaking the silence was Natalie’s panting as she stared at the sand that was once the witch.  Then she felt a hand on her shoulder. 

“You all right?” Felix asked.

She nodded, still unable to get her breath.  Felix pulled her to her feet, then walked over to where the witch had stood.   He nudged a pile of clothes with his foot, scattering the green sand underneath.  The wicked witch of the east was no more.

                                                         . . .

“I found it,” Toodles said, hurrying into the room where Felix and Natalie were searching for the witch’s hat.  He skidded to a stop in the middle of the room, holding up a yellow cap.  “It was shoved in a boot in the hall closet.”  He took off his own hat and replaced it with the yellow one.  “What do you think?”

“It’s not really your color,” Natalie said with a smile, hopping off the couch she stood on. 

He grinned.  “Let’s have a word with the conductor monkey and see what he thinks.”

The flying monkeys were all milling about in the yard.  Since the witch’s death, they hadn’t dared lay hands on the captives, but they also hadn’t seemed eager to let them leave. 

Toodles strutted out in front of the group, who began shuffling their feet and flapping their wings nervously, pointing at the hat and muttering to each other.  The one with the conductor’s hat stepped forward and half bowed to Toodles. 

“You are our master now,” it said.  “What is your bidding?”

Toodles drew himself up and put on a stern face. “First, you are to return our belongings.  Then you will leave this place and never return.”

“As you command.” The monkey bowed low.  

“Good.” Toodles nodded satisfaction.  The monkey with Felix’s club came forward and gave it to Toodles and two others hurried off toward the house. 

“If you’re not quick about it, I’ll have your tails,” Toodles called after them.  He took the older boy’s weapon and handed it to him, grinning.  “Let’s have a look at what the witch kept in her pantry, huh?  I’m starving.”

Felix smiled and clapped him on the shoulder, following him toward the house. 

“I’m going to see about those beds upstairs too,” Toodles continued.  “It’s been ages since I slept in a real bed.  Then tomorrow we can go back to finding Glinda.  We’ll be home in no time.”

Wednesday, April 8, 2015

Short Percy Jackson Fanfic: Luke Learns About Annabeth

These are two selections from a very short story about Luke Castellan and others in Elysium  I was planning to write but haven't gotten around to.  The first one is the beginning, from right after The Last Olympian, and the other would be closer to the end of the short story, after The Mark of Athena.

 
Zoe sat near the edge of the Blessed River, listening to her sisters tell her about all that had happened since she’d died.  It had been over a year they said.  Strange, it seemed longer than that, and yet shorter at the same time.  There had been a battle for Olympus not days ago, and that was what had sent so many of them here.  She found that she wasn’t sad that so many of the huntresses had died.  They had died well, in defense of their lady and her home, and the Lady Artemis had seen to it that they had all been sent to Elysium.  Now, they were reunited, and all she could think of was how glad she was to have them here with her. 

There were many demigods arriving in Elysium as well.  They were gathered not far from where the former huntresses sat, those that had previously died, meeting those that had only just come.  It was a happy gathering, and even though they were demigods, Zoe couldn’t help but smile watching them.

Then her smile faltered.  She recognized the one that had just come.  Tall, well built, and, she had to admit, handsome, with a scar on the left side of his face.  He had been there when she died.  He was the one who had helped the Titans imprison Artemis.  He hung back from the other demigods, looking somewhat like a whipped dog that expected its master to return any moment.  When the other demigods noticed him, they all stopped speaking and a heavy silence fell.  Some turned away, walking farther into Elysium, several ignored him, and a few approached him, and spoke to him in tones too low for Zoe to hear what was said.  He looked confused, as if he couldn’t believe he was here, and wasn’t sure he’d stay.  One of the demigods seemed to be trying to convince him to go further into the realm with him.  The scarred boy refused.  Then, with all the new arrivals in, the crowd of demigods broke up, leaving only the hesitant one.

He is right to be hesitant, Zoe thought.  After what he did to the lady Artemis.  She’d heard a lot of other things he’d been doing since then as well.  Had the gods made a mistake in sending him here? 

She stood, and strode up to him.  “How, by Olympus, did you get here?”

 

“You tell him.”

“Oh no, I’m not telling him.”

“Well somebody needs to.  He’d want us to tell him.”

“Well I don’t want to be the one that has to do it.”

“Cease your bickering,” Zoe snapped, standing.  “I will tell him.”

No one said anything else as she left the building.  No one was sure how the news had come to them.  In Elysium, they only received news from the outside from newly dead souls, and they never heard anything from the other realms of the dead.  But this was big enough that somehow it had rippled through the entire underworld and gotten to them.  She wasn’t sure who had heard it first; she had learned of it from Jodi, a girl who had been a daughter of Hermes and Cabin Councilor at Camp Half-Blood before she was killed by a Cyclops.  She was the one who had called this meeting.

Zoe walked through the streets of Elysium city and out into the surrounding country.  She wasn’t sure where she would find him, but she half hoped it would take some time.  Unfortunately, it did not.  The first place she decided to look was in the large meadow, just outside of the orchard, where many of Elysium’s residents enjoyed spending time.  And there he was, sprawled in the grass under a tree, relaxing in its shade. 

Zoe took a breath and looked around.  There was no one else nearby, none that she could see at all. 

I suppose that is best, she thought, smoothing out her shirt while she tried to think of how she would begin. 

But then he saw her.  He sat up on his elbows and flashed her a grin that cut into her.  That grin that had annoyed her at first, then intrigued her, and now could melt her, and make her often solemn face return the smile.  But not this time. 

He’s happy now.  Will that make this worse or easier to bear?   She decided that it didn’t matter, this was going to be incredibly difficult either way.  You have to tell him.

She squared her shoulders and walked over to him.

“Hey,” he said, “what’s up?”  He reached up and took hold of her arm, trying to pull her down to sit next to him. 

She resisted, jerking her arm away and taking a step back. 

His expression clouded and he sat up the rest of the way.  “What’s wrong?”

Zoe took a breath, finding that she couldn’t look him in the face.  “Luke, something has happened.”

He stood, now concerned.  “What is it?”

“Annabeth,” she started, then made herself look him in the eye, trying to make her voice a little firmer.  “Annabeth fell into Tartarus.”

“What?”

“They were on a quest, and somehow she fell in through the upper world.”

He look away, his breath starting to come rapidly, and shook his head. 

Zoe took a step towards him, searching her mind for anything she could possibly say to him, anything to make this easier for him.

Then, suddenly, he turned and started to run.  Somehow, she knew what he was thinking.

“Luke no,” she said, starting to sprint after him.  “Luke, you can’t.  They won’t let you leave.”

If he heard, he wasn’t listening; he just kept running, but Zoe was a huntress, and she soon caught up to him.  She put her arms around his shoulders, across his chest, trying to hold him back.

“No, Zoe!” he said, struggling against her. “Let me go!  Let me go to her.  It should be me down there.  Not her.  Let me go.”

 His struggling weakened and he let himself fall to his knees.  Zoe tightened her arms around him as she let herself down as well, resting her cheek on his shoulder blade. 

“Let me go,” he said his voice breaking, but she could tell this time he didn’t mean it.   He went to his hands and knees, digging his fingers into the dirt, as the tears came.  Deep, gut wrenching sobs that wracked his entire body. 

Zoe found tears misting her own eyes, as she knelt there with her arms around him, shaking as he shook, her own heart breaking over his pain.  She knew how much he loved Annabeth, how much guilt he still had for the promise to her he had broken.  She wished with everything in her that there was something, anything she could say that would help him.  But she could not, so she simple remained there with him, hoping that at least her presence might be some comfort, so that at least he didn’t have to be alone in his grief.